You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems.
You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain the situation
Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to the purchased brand-new from your company which I realized its lens has some movement problem just after opening its box at home.
My name is Ayoub. I have been a regular customer to your company over four years, and I had not experienced similar problem before. When I returned the camera over a week ago, I spoke to the company representative to repair it soonest possible. I took a confirmation that it would be fixed in five working days only, but nothing is done.
It is urgent for me to get the camera within this week because I work as a photographer and have committed with a lot of photo sessions with my customers. Currently, any delay of getting the camera functional, it will have a detrimental effect on my work and reputation in this field.
I would therefore request that you treat this matter personally and ensure that it is treated in priority with the maintenance department. If the camera can not be fixed, I would request a replacement one as I have a warranty policy which advises a replacement in its clause no. 11.
I look forward to the camera being either repaired or replaced.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the soonest'.
Suggestion: it the soonest
...to the company representative to repair it soonest possible. I took a confirmation that it...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed, I would request a replacement one as I have a warranty policy which advises a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72380952381 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77155947981 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4879566283 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1818181818 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241195300363 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794276976094 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670625680478 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110388198401 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417097377514 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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