You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You have spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain the situation say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to show my discontentment regarding the mobile that I bought from a shop, Mitral Telecom, Bathing, this week.
I am one of your regular customer, dealing from last three years with your reputed company. My family has bought numerous gadgets, but never got frustrated to such an extent that I feel this time on my purchase of cell
phone having model number Y201 on 10th May 2021.
Since the day of purchase, I was very excited to use it for my useful work but unfortunately, it underwent a major problem, when all my saved data collapsed. Apart from this, when I restarted it, the screen started blinking continuously for a long time. Two days ago, I approached your company by making a call, you directed me to perform some activities, I did the same, but still the same is happening.
As you know, I am a sales manager, so I have to save a lot of data on my phone related to sales, thus you could imagine how it is difficult for me
to survive without a phone. Kindly take this matter into your consideration and correct the bug, otherwise replace this with the new one. Having gone through your company policy, I am entitled to a full refund, if replacing is not possible.
Looking forward to a quick response from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Aspect AUR.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, thus, apart from, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63675213675 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59560772984 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675213675214 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3525833527 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6363636364 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242009341863 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781925400285 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539170236473 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10018249328 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365244125944 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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