You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:
• explain why you are writing
• describe your qualifications and experience
• explain how they can contact you
Dear Mr. Sullivan,
I am a Spanish instructor in London. I am writing about your advertisement in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional for a Spanish instructor.
From your advertisement in the magazine, I really interested to have more information about your language institution. Because I want to change my workplace.
I have several years’ experiences at different language institution for teaching to different ages especially to teenagers. As you know to teach to teenagers are really difficult because some of them are not keen on learning the language and some parents forced them to learn a foreign language. Also, I have a master degree in the Spanish language from Oxford University and I have some certification in teaching method for foreign language
If you are interested to have more information about my CV and resume, you can contact my email as smithbrown@yahoo.com or my cell phone 0018187234054.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Smith Brown
- You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter• Explain why you have moved• Describe the new house• Invite your friend to come and visit 56
- You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.-Say what the part 84
- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 42
- In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools Others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mation about your language institution. Because I want to change my workplace. I hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40236686391 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39189022457 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9412909578 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266843595264 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103072553445 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875200636449 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13330085055 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904140927034 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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