You have decided to do course abroad. Your friend lives in the same city where you plan to study.
Write to your friend explaining academic profile and expectations from course and University you have aimed for. Inquire all options of studying from her
In your letter,
Explain why you are not able to contact your friend earlier
Disclose your personal research from Canadian schools
Ask her for a suggestion
Dear Ria,
Hi, I am good. Hope you are doing well. It has been very long since we talk to each other. I have been busy with my final exams so could not talk to you in these days.
Actually, we are moving to Toronto in the next month. As of now, I have completed my 11th grade and entering in to 12th grade in computer science. I have done research about teachers of computer course from Canada and came to know that Biche is the good person in computers. Based on the reviews I have choose to join in her school. At the same time, found that there students will speak both English and French and I have joined French learning here in India So that it will be easy for me to mingle with friends.
I need your suggestion about any other schools or university regarding computer course. It would be appreciated if you can tell me about some other college nearby Ontario or Toronto.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Best wishes,
Daniel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ria, Hi, I am good. Hope you are doing well. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so could not talk to you in these days. Actually, we are moving to Toronto in th...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
... computers. Based on the reviews I have choose to join in her school. At the same time...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e waiting for your reply. Best wishes, Daniel.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35028248588 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14718998833 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3126332715 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2307692308 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204509630646 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645033313453 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579063509439 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111902077711 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208110212545 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.