Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the meal I had at your restaurant last week, which was one of the most terrible experiences I had ever faced. My family and I visited there to celebrate my sisters' birthday and unfortunately we experienced a couple of problems related to long waiting time and unsatisfactory food.
First off, we booked our table two days in advance, yet we had to wait for an hour before we could be seated. Secondly, the food service was extremely slow, and the assistant manager took our orders incorrectly. Worse still, the food served to us was not hot enough and the gravy was too watery. This was supposed to be a surprise party for my sibling and I wanted to treat her with the best delicacies. However, it ended up as a disaster.
The experience was entirely unacceptable, and I would like to request a refund of the amount that I paid. In addition to that, I would also suggest that you train your staff to handle customers in a correct way. I hope you will take necessary actions to maintain your reputation and food quality.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Sharma.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ou train your staff to handle customers in a correct way. I hope you will take necessary actions...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, still, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68095238095 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75964193017 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671428571429 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6430743936 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9166666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180523084274 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598773169263 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457259348801 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109391434691 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363094141768 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ou train your staff to handle customers in a correct way. I hope you will take necessary actions...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, still, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68095238095 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75964193017 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671428571429 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6430743936 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9166666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180523084274 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598773169263 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457259348801 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109391434691 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363094141768 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.