You have an extended family and every year you all get together to go on a family trip for a week. Your uncle is in charge of the plans this year and you would like to suggest a place you have visited.
Write a letter to your uncle. In your letter:
• suggest the place you recommend
• describe your experience in this place
• mention what you could do there
Dear Uncle Smith,
Hello, how are you? Hope you and Aunt Rita are having a joyous time. I was very excited to know the place we will visit this time for our family holiday. I am writing this letter to suggest a place to visit as I am sure that we will have a great enjoyment there.
I would like to recommend that we should plan a family holiday in Singapore as It has plethora of exciting activities and astounding places to visit which will not only be loved by children but also by the adults.
In my summer holidays I along with my college friends planned a trip to Singapore and had a great fun. It is a very breathtaking country and has a number of extraordinary places to visit. The place I loved the most was the Sentosa Island which has many attractions such as, Disney Park, casino, water park, car racing and exotic beach restaurants.
I hope everyone will enjoy this place as it has innumerable of fun and entertainment activities for instance the exotic sea food, shopping, relax and enjoy the sun set by the beach side, water park, animals and birds park, Moreover, kids will love the Disneyland as it has several amazing rides.
I hope we all will make an intriguing itinerary for Singapore.
Take care and see you soon,
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e will have a great enjoyment there. I would like to recommend that we should ...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you soon, With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59565217391 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50323420288 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3100478408 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190019269625 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808880724807 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503655275197 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979183272238 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697538317533 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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