you have a extra room an appartment and would you like to rent it out to your stutents.Write a letter to university council officer and say
1.describe your appartment and the facilities available
2.why do you want to rent out room
3.what kind of tenet would you prefer
Dear sir,
I am drafting to inform you that I am looking for a tenat to my 1bk apartment.Also,my preferable is our students who are all currently looking for arented house outside.
To begin wiyh,my apartment total square feet is 900 and which one is available on 2 nd floor.Also lift is available.Mainly,people are looking for furnished house and which already we have set it up in my house.
Earlier my brother is planning to stay in my appartment due to to his intenship but unfortunately he is moving to mumbai for his project in order to this I am planning torent it out
I am looking for two to three students who can share my appartment and total rent is INR7000 per anum and total advance is 30000.Also I am looking for a final year students so that next year they can vocate my appartment and before my brother come to bangalore.
i hope at the earliest reply form you soon.
yours sincerely,
john.
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...at the earliest reply form you soon. yours sincerely, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0876750758 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.705767853 44.8134815571 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.8 76.5299724578 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 16.8248392259 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937889119215 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605318139897 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300444236498 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509178361341 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243029846612 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 8.37731958763 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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