You have a friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this friend to visit you.
In your letter:
• invite him/her to a public event in your country
• describe the public event
• explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? I hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to invite you to visit my country and spend some time with me.
I would like you to visit me in the month of January as I am very interested for you to attend the Republic Day event on 26th of January. I am sure you will enjoy the event and will get to know about the history of India and period of glory and sacrifices by our great leaders for their country
On 26th of January Republic Day is celebrated as on this day the constitution of India came into force on 26th January 1950. On this day, flag hoisting ceremonies and parades by armed forces and school children are held at Rajpath in New Delhi, which showcases a multi-hued image of the country's rich cultural heritage and military prowess. Moreover, people pay tribute to the martyrs who have sacrificed their lives for the country and to confer bravery awards to gallantry award winners such as military persons, citizenry and children for showing courage in the face of adversity.
I have planned several other activities for us to enjoy. We will visit all the monuments and historical places in Delhi. Furthermore, we will not only enjoy the scrumptious and succulent street food in Delhi but will also do a lot of shopping.
Inform me once you will book the tickets and since in January there are winters please keep warm clothes as well as medicines you require.
Take care and see you soon,
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...country and spend some time with me. I would like you to visit me in the month...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Republic Day event on 26th of January. I am sure you will enjoy the event and wi...
^
Line 15, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Take care and see you soon, With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61797752809 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39746601348 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6096561627 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241759932335 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962978085691 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609321585586 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128313532697 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736623943898 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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