Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Siamak Mirzaei and I registered for the Social Marketing course in Cambridge Institute of Technology last July. I am writing this letter to inform you that I cannot attend this course for I have faced some unexpected issues.
The Social Marketing course started last July 2014 and it was planned to be finished by February this year but because of the numerous number of the public holidays in 2014, it will be finished by May 2015. This class was on every odd day in the evening from 7 to 9 so that employees like me can attend the class after the working hours. Unfortunately, I cannot continue this course as I am not free in the mentioned times since I should take care of my 4-year-old child in the evenings from the first week of March. I am a married man and my wife works in the evenings of the same days on weekdays. She kindly asked her boss to change her roster for the expected time, but she has to work in the evenings from the first week of March.
I talked to Mr. Lee who is the topic coordinator on 10th of February and he kindly recommended the online course to me. Therefore, I am going the watch the recorded lectures and attend the final exam at the end of this course. He asked me to inform you about this matter and get your confirmation.
Thanks in advance for your cooperation.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Abcd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47464498937 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.40119493 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2307692308 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244536706132 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841280875106 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636798372429 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12453674805 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416759512194 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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