You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letterDescribe the situationExplain why you cannot continue your course at this timeSa

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You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.

Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter

Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue your course at this time
Say what action you would like to take

Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to inform that I will not be able to continue the part-time course.

As you are aware I am a full-time employee at Zeta Inc and had joined the part-time evening classes to strengthen my profile and help me in constant endeavour to achieve success at professional front. To elucidate I have recently been assigned to some international projects in which I am required to travel internationally. Hence, I am not in a position to continue the course for at least three months until the time I finish these critical projects and do a smooth handover to my clients.

I certainly was aiming to complete this course but due to work assignments lately, I ask to shift me in a new batch after three months. If you are not able to offer me this option then I request you to refund the partial fee amount and credit this amount in my bank account.
I look forward to your immediate response on this issue.
Yours sincerely,
Mark

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse on this issue. Yours sincerely, Mark
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, then, well, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72534401498 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5615582931 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328743011657 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116730533648 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05873074276 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178828054029 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776329098983 0.0580467560999 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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