Dear sir,
I'm writing this letter to inform u that I will not be able to continue the computer diploma course from next month. i'm Malsha Perera and my student ID is 3990. Currently I'm working in a private company and I'm following this part time course while I'm working.
I have a great difficulty to attend the classes from next month because I'm going to be busy with my office work. Recently I was promoted to a new position in a different department in my company and I'm going to take up my new position from the beginning of November. So I would have to deal with challenges and I hope it will take much time to adopt myself. Furthermore I'm going to have a three months training which will be provided from the company.so most of the time I would have to stay after hours until I get used to new work. So, I don't think I could give much commitment and concentration on my studies.
I would like to temporary stop the computer course and restart after three months. I would deeply appreciate if u could consider my situation and help me to make necessary arrangements.
Thank you
Yours faithfully
Reza Afshar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48780487805 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57871210056 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3341270873 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6363636364 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119087967618 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507612409647 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570887308136 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611257307848 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371626155929 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.