Dear Mrs. Ha,
I am writing to inform you that I will unable to continue with the part-time English course.
I have been attending your evening course for last two months and I enjoyed it very much. As I am working for an international organization, that requires me to use advanced English, your course has helped me improve my speaking skills significantly.
However, my organization has just received a new six-months project in Ho Chi Minh City; and I was assigned to be the Project Coordinator for it. I will have to flight there this weekend. Although I am very excited about this opportunity, I regret that I have to withdraw from your class.
I will keep practicing what you have taught me, and when I come back Ha Noi, I will definitely register with one of your courses again.
I hope this does not cause you any inconvenience,
Yours sincerely,
Viet Tran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80392156863 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87201174272 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692810457516 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8017736462 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255514650582 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976950455792 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076207194863 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144952590715 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661591685435 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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