You have a full-time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
-describe the situation
-explain why you cannot continue at this time
-say what action you would like to take
Hello Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard to my course which I am attending at your college.
I am a student of Business and Logistics Training course in your institution and I will not able to attend the classes on 20th July onwards. I am hoping that you would allow me to continue the course with the next term.
I work with a international telecom company as and Business Analyst and due to some latest projects, my office demands more of my time. Besides, I have strict deadlines ahead, which cause me to work a few extra hours a day. Moreover, I will travel overseas at the beginning of the July for some training related to my work. All these work matters force me to skip some of the classes for the time being. However, I would like to finish the course as it would be firmly beneficial for my career.
Therefore, I humbly request you to allow me to attend the next available term to catch up with my skipped classes.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Tomas Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to my co...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ttend the classes on 20th July onwards. I am hoping that you would allow me to co...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ue the course with the next term. I work with a international telecom compa...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e with the next term. I work with a international telecom company as and Bu...
^
Line 13, column 365, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...All these work matters force me to skip some of the classes for the time being. However, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4321822431 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.742421031 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159358847743 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641844129159 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567352790916 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863991118569 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450556394569 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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