You have gained admission in a prestigious college. Now you have to arrange for the accommodation. Write a letter to the college stating your likes and dislikes in the choice of food and accommodation.
Dear Sir
I have recently got an admission in your esteemed institute and writing this letter to tell you about the accommodation requirements for the first year.
I am new to the city and not aware of the surrounding so I would prefer to live just at a walking distance from the college. I am very much conscious related to my studies so want to stay in a single room. If, it would not be possible then, I can adjust in double sharing room but the condition would be that the another student must be of my branch. In this way, it would be helpful for me in studies and to complete the homework given be the tutors.
After studying eight hours in classes, it would not be possible to prepare food. Hence, I want to have a room with food facility available and I am purely vegetarian. Also, I am allergic to spicy and fried food.
Hope that you will find the best room for me which suits my taste and looking forward for your response.
Yours faithfully
Flora Thompson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at a walking distance from the college. I am very much conscious related to my st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44198895028 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44657203486 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60773480663 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0180727356 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162078665757 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630141798808 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683479030826 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121481886259 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082969263363 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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