You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
To,
The Branch Manager
Bank of Nova Scotia
Downtown Main branch
Nova Scotia
Reference :- Rekha P. Shah, savings bank account No. 30502014555
Subject :- Wrong debit transaction in savings bank account
Hello Sir / Madam,
I, the undersigned, hold a savings account with your bank branch. this is to inform you that I am in receipt of a letter last week, from the bank, regarding excess withdrawal of funds from my account.
With respect to the stated payment of $1000 thereby reportedly amounting to overdrawn balance of $240, I hereby submit that the transaction has not been made by me at all. Accordingly, I had also filed a written complaint to the grievances Officer about this fraudulent transaction entry reflecting in my account. Your grievances team has already looked into the matter and had assured me that the said debit entry shall be reversed and a revised statement shall be sent to me for the said period.
I therefore request your good self to kindly consider the same as well as not levy the bank charges of $70 in my above case.
Yours truly,
Rekha Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... savings account with your bank branch. this is to inform you that I am in receipt o...
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Line 15, column 62, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'amounting' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'amounts'.
Suggestion: amounts
...tated payment of 000 thereby reportedly amounting to overdrawn balance of 40, I hereby su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57414292291 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5018564015 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 4.34317383033 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328576478959 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117145890192 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898509831093 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141730462287 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111434070229 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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