you have had bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. you know that this information is incorrect.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I have been a client at your bank since 2003; I am writing to you for a complaint about the last statement which I received yesterday.
Regarding the information that I got from the bank stating letter, I observed that there is a mistake on it. it shows that my account is $240 , but it should be S200; the last payment was $200 . Actully I am quite surprised by that because this is the first time I find such this mistake.
Hence, I would like to request your bank to Verify my bank account, because I believe that there is a misunderstanding on this matter.
I expect to hear from you very soon, and please give this matter your immediate attention.
yours faithfully.
Ahmed Karem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ke on it. it shows that my account is 40 , but it should be S200; the last payment...
^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... should be S200; the last payment was 00 . Actully I am quite surprised by that be...
^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... matter your immediate attention. yours faithfully. Ahmed Karem ...
^^^^^
Line 23, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... yours faithfully. Ahmed Karem
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 608.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 128.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60882661964 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6796875 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.107423778 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378343147464 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126974714218 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700291737143 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197658596656 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121833099578 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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