You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and thatyou will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorr

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter t inform you that I have been wrongly charged of $70 with regards to $240 overdrawn. I have been banking with your bank for a long time and have always maintained the required minimum balance. There seems to be an incorrect information with regards to the withdrawal amount.

Let me explain in detail. During the sale last week I had purchased a bedside table for $24. However, the seller wrongly charged my cad with $240 thus, resulting in an overdraft. He then paid me the additional amount in check which I immediately deposited in the bank along with some cash to maintain the minimum balance. Due to the long weekend the amount will get cleared on Monday. Perhaps, I can stop by the bank tomorrow with the receipt of the mentioned purchase.

I therefore, request you to withdraw the $70 penalty fee. It is clearly a mistake of the vendor. You can also check my previous bank records. I can assure you that I have never overdrawn. Could you please look into the matter at your earliest and resolve the issue.

Thanking you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely,
Katie Adams

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, then, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64390243902 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50947046183 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0950229247 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0588235294 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293076793918 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854066368785 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604507326627 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177175640419 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461868669639 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.