These days many animal species, especially the rare one's are kept in zoo's. But what is the purpose of removing them from their natural habitat? Currently, one of the hotly debated topic is that - "a zoo has no useful aim". While, some may agree, I am completely against this school of though and believe zoo's serve a very important purpose of protecting animals as well as educating human beings.
To begin with, due to an increasing in the number of animals being poached, many have gone extinct, while some are on the verge of disappearing. Keeping animals in the zoo ensures that they are well maintained and properly looked after. To cite an example, long time ago panda's were under the danger of disappearing, however, in the last decade zoo's all over the world volunteered to adopt them and provide them with shelter and medical aid to help them procreate consequently increasing their numbers.
Furthermore, zoo's also educate the general public about wildlife and encourage them to contribute their bit in saving the environment. Animals and birds are trained to perform harmless tricks and also deliver important messages. For instance, in Singapore zoo some trash is thrown in a tub filled with water and a trained seal removes it and segregates bio-degradable waste from the non bio-degradable one's, thus, not only making it entertaining but also informational. Moreover, a sense of awareness is developed in the minds of the audience.
To summarize, I would like to reiterate that up until now zoo's have been a major contributor of protecting the lives of millions of animals. If they were left in the wild their population would be alarmingly low. Environmentalists are running pillar to post to safeguard more and more species in zoo's so that the future generations can live and learn from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
.... Furthermore, zoos also educate the general public about wildlife and encourage them to co...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cting the lives of millions of animals. If they were left in the wild their popula...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0297029703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85608161929 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63696369637 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.445286442 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910856036185 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284800332012 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357143287298 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520067580669 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018045165872 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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