You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home.
Write a letter to the council. In your letter
• say how you heard about the plan
• explain how you feel about it
• ask for more information about it
HELLO SIR ,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM YOU ABOUT SOME INFORMATION.I HAVE HEARD FROM ONE OF MY FRIEND WHO IS WORKING IN A CONSTRUCTION COMPANY IN NOIDA THAT THEY HAVE PLANNED TO DEVELOP A SHOPPING CENTRE NEAR MY HOME.MY HOME COMES UNDER THE LOCALITY OF WARD NUMBER 3 , SANTOKHGARH.
WHEN I CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THIS , I AM COMPLETELY SHOCKED BECAUSE THE PLOT WHERE THEY HAVE PLANNED TO CONSTRUCT IS A PLAYGROUND FOR OUR SOCIETY CHILDREN.THERE ARE TOTAL 25 TREES IN THIS GROUND WHICH WOULD DEFINITLY LOGGED FOR CONSTRUCTION. AND WHEN CITY CENTRE WILL DEVELOPED THE ROAD IN FRONT OF OUR HOUSE WILL FULL WITH TRAFFIC AND POLLUTION. I HAVE DONE A MEETING REGARD THIS DEVELOPMENT WITH MY SOCIETY AND WE ALL DECIDED TO STOP THIS DEVELOPMENT BECAUSE THIS PLOT IS THE ONLY AREA FOR OUR CHILDREN .
PLEASE LET ME KNOW HOW CAN WE HAULT THIS DEVELOPMENT LEGALLY. WHAT MEASURES AND PROCEDURES SHOULD WE TAKE FROM OUR SIDE . ALL THE DOCUMENTATION THAT IS NEED TO BE COMPLETED MAKE US CLEAR. WE ALL GET IT DONE SOON.
I AM WAITING FOREWARD TO HEAR FROM YOU.
THANKS,
YOUR SINCERELY
ANCHAL
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
HELLO SIR , I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM YOU...
^^
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ER TO INFORM YOU ABOUT SOME INFORMATION.I HAVE HEARD FROM ONE OF MY FRIEND WHO IS...
^
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...OMES UNDER THE LOCALITY OF WARD NUMBER 3 , SANTOKHGARH. WHEN I CAME TO KNOW ABOUT...
^^
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...OKHGARH. WHEN I CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THIS , I AM COMPLETELY SHOCKED BECAUSE THE PLO...
^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'WILL' requires the base form of the verb: 'develop'
Suggestion: Develop
...CONSTRUCTION. AND WHEN CITY CENTRE WILL DEVELOPED THE ROAD IN FRONT OF OUR HOUSE WILL FUL...
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Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...S PLOT IS THE ONLY AREA FOR OUR CHILDREN . PLEASE LET ME KNOW HOW CAN WE HAULT TH...
^^
Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... PROCEDURES SHOULD WE TAKE FROM OUR SIDE . ALL THE DOCUMENTATION THAT IS NEED TO B...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72105263158 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72376735658 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.4476414776 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 4.34317383033 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242282660904 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740803786155 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087967789872 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137185220892 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110628543088 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.