Dear Bryan,
I have recently returned from my vacation, which lasted for four days on your cruise ship - The Royal Voyager. The trip was fantastic; I enjoyed most of the journey. However, I wanted to bring a few things to your notice, that made me feel annoyed!
As this trip was a return trip from Singapore to Thailand, there were few activities I really wanted to engage myself into, so that this one would be a memorable holiday. I remember quite well before we'd sail, I had requested for reservation to be made for the island hoping tour in Thailand. I was highly disappointed, when my name was not included in the list of passengers that would go for this tour. I was really looking forward to this tour, as I had read many good reviews on the internet in various travel forums.
This cruise holiday would have been much more memorable one if you had been much careful in adding my name to the list of passengers that singed-up for this tour. I was very unhappy that was not compensated for the error, that was made by you and your team.
I would sincerely like to request a refund to the booking amount, which I made for the island hopping tour. This experience has left me wonder, whether or not I should recommend your tour services to my friends and family. It would be appreciable, if you would process my refund at the earliest, so that I can be content and also be able to recommend your cruise tour services to my friends.
Kind Regards,
Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...things to your notice, that made me feel annoyed! As this trip was a return tr...
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Message: Did you mean 'we'd'?
Suggestion: we'd
...e holiday. I remember quite well before wed sail, I had requested for reservation t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...passengers that would go for this tour. I was really looking forward to this tour...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p for this tour. I was very unhappy that was not compensated for the error, that ...
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ur. This experience has left me wonder, whether or not I should recommend your tour services t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52059925094 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43677857875 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531835205993 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5765828079 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.583333333 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121295543681 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048140726231 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385191472532 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878971860729 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381641006193 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.