Dear Serena,
I am very excited to know that you will be visiting us during the summer holiday's. I too will be on leave during that time and can show you around. Could you please let me know your date of arrival and for how long do you intend to stay?
Once here, you definitely need to visit me and my family as we are all looking forward to meet you. Then you can visit Garden's by the Bay in the evening, they put up a lovely light show and you should not miss it. Visiting Sentosa should also be a part of the itinerary as it's one of the key attraction for tourists. Also make a trip to the zoo and watch their birds and animal show. Take a walk down Chinatown and Little India to experience their culture and food. You can travel around using either public transport or cycle as they are more convenient. Stop by the beach to catch the beautiful sunset and enjoy the cool breeze while sipping on sugarcane juice.
In addition, please make sure to try out the local cuisines which are available in various food courts. Since, you enjoy sea food, try out freshly barbecued fish and prawns. Even though the national dish of Singapore is chili crab, you also have to try the pepper crab. Please let me know if you need any help during your stay, I will be happy to oblige.
Looking forward to meeting you. Have a safe trip.
Your Friend,
Katie.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...my family as we are all looking forward to meet you. Then you can visit Gardens by the ...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...one of the key attraction for tourists. Also make a trip to the zoo and watch their ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...f the key attraction for tourists. Also make a trip to the zoo and watch their birds...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36220472441 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07222792865 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1032049746 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1764705882 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215598504129 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735414910204 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859776387378 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107792581561 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465810445844 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.