you have just finished your college. write a letter to your best friend inviting him to stay at your place for one month.
- explain the situation
- mention your plans
- suggest what to bring
Dear Anish,
Hellow buddy ! Hope you doing very well. I am immensely excited to invite you to my place for a long vacation. As my parents, planning to visit my brother for a month by next week. so we'll be on our own in whole house.
And well ! You got deep interest in the forest excursion. Hence, we could go for trekking the nearest mountain range. That has a very dense jungle around. Then after we will have barbecue at my place using vegetables freshly picked by workers from my farms. That'll satisfy your hunger for outdoor grilled food. And river side long walk where the sound of running water and breath-taking beauty of the scenery gives immense calmness.
What I would suggest you is, bring some warm clothes or else you'll freeze to death as it gets cold during night. Get the trekking shoes to walk in hilly area and rest I'm gonna manage for you. Bring some live chicken if you wanna have BBQ chicken ! Just kidding.
looking forward to hear from you soon,
With love,
Bhavin Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...it my brother for a month by next week. so well be on our own in whole house. A...
^^
Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'barbecued'.
Suggestion: barbecued
... jungle around. Then after we will have barbecue at my place using vegetables freshly pi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 26, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...e calmness. What I would suggest you is, bring some warm clothes or else youll ...
^^
Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...you is, bring some warm clothes or else youll freeze to death as it gets cold during ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 168, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ng shoes to walk in hilly area and rest Im gonna manage for you. Bring some live c...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...nna have BBQ chicken ! Just kidding. looking forward to hear from you soon, With ...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...cken ! Just kidding. looking forward to hear from you soon, With love, Bhavin ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11432339128 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.755555555556 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6191397254 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5714285714 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196348947105 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054661239434 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479404080415 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956660919233 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361152049568 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.