You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Simpson,
I am your next door neighbour. As you may have already noticed, we have recently settled in this flat. Therefore, I have not the opportunity to be acquainted with you yet. In fact, we are a family of three: me, my wife and our 8 years old child.
The following Sunday is going to be my son’s birthday; hence, my spouse and I have decided to celebrate with family and friends on that special night in our apartment. The party will commence on 7:00 pm and terminate around midnight. It will consist of some music and dancing indoors in which a small music band will also be attending; however, dinner will be served about 10:00 o’clock in the garden. Although the participants are comparatively limited, we are afraid to bother you by late night noises.
On the other hand, I had initially intended to invite you and your family to our ceremony by phone, but I hesitated whether it could be a good idea or not. After consulting with my wife, she suggested it would be more appropriate if I write a letter to do so.
We will be deeply pleased in case you kindly accept my invitation to our beloved one’s celebration. In this way, not only find we the chance to become familiar with you, but the gathering might also perturb you less.
Best Regards,
Ali Kazemian
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| 2019-02-14 | Richa Dhiman | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64655172414 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63545071584 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64224137931 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0219149298 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140794498765 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540635566054 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644786771137 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988701552964 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687061900678 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.