Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
Hope you are doing well. I am glad to invite you for our second wedding anniversary, that will happen at following Sunday.
I am your new neighbor next door. As you might have already noticed that, we have recently settled here. Therefore, I did not get an opportunity to be acquainted with you. I fact we are a family of two, just I and my wife moved in.
It is our second wedding anniversary, so I and my spouse decided to celebrate it with our friends and family. The party will commence at 6.00 pm in the evening and finish late at night. Later, around 9.00 pm dinner will be served in the garden. Party will consist of music and dancing indoors. Although, guests will be limited but there might be chances of probable noise that could disturb you. However, joining us may also be the best way to escape the disturbance. This will be a great opportunity for us to become familiar with each other also.
We will be deeply pleased in case you accept the invitation and join the surge of mirth and merriment with us.
Best Regards,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'pm'.
Suggestion: pm
...family. The party will commence at 6.00 pm in the evening and finish late at night. Later, around...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 544, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...r us to become familiar with each other also. We will be deeply pleased in case ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...merriment with us. Best Regards, ABC
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52040816327 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38293163603 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0879592787 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.375 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.25 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119374408356 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394957738663 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048846153334 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656144832868 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619794417973 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.