You have just moved into a new house and you have decided to have a party. You are worried that the noise from your party will annoy your new neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself
• Explain that you plan to have a party
• Invite your neighbour to the party
Dear Carole,
As you may have noticed, I’ve just moved into the property next to yours and Dan- the previous tenant- gave me your name. I hope you don’t mind me writing. As Dan might have mentioned, I’m a trainee accountant with a motorbike and a pet parrot.
Firstly, can I apologise if I’ve disturbed you over the past couple of days? I’ve been dragging heavy items of furniture about. I’m really sorry if you’ve been bothered by the banging and clattering.
The main reason for writing is to let you know that I plan to hold a house-warming party this coming Saturday. I’ve invited friends and colleagues. I will try to make sure it isn’t too rowdy but it might go on into the small hours. I’d love it if you could come. There’s no need to bring anything except yourself. Don’t worry if you’re not free. You’d be extremely welcome to pop round another day.
I look forward to seeing you really soon (and just knock on the wall if I’m making too much noise!)
Best wishes
James
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| 2019-07-15 | Saira Faiz | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01111111111 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67946005248 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716666666667 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3329676851 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4285714286 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233485875173 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876026238962 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751217096722 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151634323323 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799336995389 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.