Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to you regarding your article about Tehran in the international travel magazine.
First of all, thank you for introducing Tehran to the world in your article. However, there is a part in which you have mentioned that Golestan palace was built in 1977 by the English engineers and architects which is incorrect. In fact, this palace was constructed in 1987 by the shah of that period who is called shah Abbas. Shah Abbas hired couple of Persian architect and painters to build this beatify building.
I believe as you are providing information for a wide range of reader it is vital that this information is reliable and accurate. Readers trust your word and I suggest that the magazine provide a correction note in the new publication for the next month and give out the right information for the readers.
Thank you in advance for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to you regarding your artic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our consideration. Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95483870968 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76708767363 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1993408617 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245334846282 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103938617818 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673271439699 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157890770154 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689697018298 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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