You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similer to each other . You don’t’ fully agree with this opinion.
Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper . In your letter
Say which points in the article you agree with
Explain ways in which your town centers is different from most other town centers
Offer to give a guided tour of our town to the writer of the article
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have gone through your article published in a newspaper on 17th of March. I am writing this letter to give my review about that reading. Though it was very well written, I disagree a little and I will explain that below.
To begin with, I would say that you piece of writing was on a great topic. In your article, you have managed to elaborate the the similarities in different cities of our country in the best possible manner. I agree with your concern about the traffic situation in most of the cities which is not good at all. Moreover, you are rightly highlighted that the parks developed by the municipal councils are very well maintained in almost every town.
However, I disagree about your opinion that all towns offer same level of tourist attractions. In my town, Gilgit, there are hindreds of tourist spots that open for public. There are some historical places, for example Altit and Baltit forts and there several natural lakes like sheosar lake and rama lake. I would love to host you for a visit to my town, I am sure you will have an amazing experience here. Kindly honor me by accepting my invitation.
Your faithfully,
Bilal Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... article, you have managed to elaborate the the similarities in different cities of our...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... article, you have managed to elaborate the the similarities in different cities of our...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67464114833 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44030396588 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6467185171 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1538461538 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309037106293 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912754870687 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057607748531 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188738084241 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595884828524 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.