You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
Dear Sir,
My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I am one of the customers of your HGD bank Noida branch. I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the current credit card statement which has been produced this month.
I received my bank statement on 19/4/21, and I was surprised to notice many transactions listed in it which are certainly now made by me. These transactions are quite expensive and the purchases included a Dell laptop, Samsung note 10 mobile phone, Smart LED MI TV, and skull candy earbuds. Besides, I already bought these items last year, and I think it is a case of fraud with my credit card account with your bank.
I would like the bank to look into these purchases and track the person who is responsible for these electronic items, as I suspect that my credit card has been misused, or perhaps I could have been subjected to the theft. In the meanwhile, I would like you to block my card as a safety measure so that it is not misused anymore.
Kindly act upon it as soon as possible to avoid any future discrepancies on my credit card.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'phone' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'phones'.
Suggestion: phones
...d a Dell laptop, Samsung note 10 mobile phone, Smart LED MI TV, and skull candy earbu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59701492537 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50983067528 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0226284111 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218830619926 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079651949065 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03522061492 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1116732958 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399941874343 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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