Dear sir,
My name is simmy, I come from the other city. I have just rented an unfurnished flat and my friend told me about your shop. I am writing this letter to take information about the cheap second hand furniture.
Perhaps you can help me. I would like to buy a sofa, dining table, double bed and a single bed for the visitors, a cupboard for the clothes and a bookcase. If you have some electronic equipment then I need a microwave oven, a refrigerator, a TV and a CD player also. These must be in clean condition and the elertronic appliance must be working properly.
It will be great if these things came within 3 months guarantee. If you do not supply electronic devices, can you suggest me another shop for them. It would be greatful if you can tell me the price of items and time of delivery.
I am waiting for your prompt reply.
Simmy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...n, a refrigerator, a TV and a CD player also. These must be in clean condition and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43396226415 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52023180908 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8329471781 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0909090909 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311980478614 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1053549496 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108580102779 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158455516591 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103819202151 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.