You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.1)thank you your friend for the holiday2)explain that you left your wallet in their house3)give them instruction of how to send back to yo

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You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.
1)thank you your friend for the holiday
2)explain that you left your wallet in their house
3)give them instruction of how to send back to you.

Dear Roma,
I am writing to express my heartiest gratitude to you for such an amazing holiday weekend.I would like to tell you that this was the most happening moment of my life and i enjoyed a lot. I would like to thank you for such a wonderful trip that i will never ever forget.

Since the day I returned home I have controlled myself to think about the weekend well spent with you.But I want to tell you that my wallet is at your place only.Somehow I left it over there and as you are aware that wallet is the most important material as it consist of all my business and credit cards.

if I am not bothering you then can you please send my wallet back to me. you just need to post it through fedex at 31,Cling Lane, Banglore.
please do not hesitate to ask any question if you need that for sending a wallet. I will be waiting for your reply.

Yours truly,
Rati

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...you for such an amazing holiday weekend.I would like to tell you that this was th...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he most happening moment of my life and i enjoyed a lot. I would like to thank yo...
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Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hank you for such a wonderful trip that i will never ever forget. Since the da...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... trip that i will never ever forget. Since the day I returned home I have controll...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...k about the weekend well spent with you.But I want to tell you that my wallet is at...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Somehow
...ou that my wallet is at your place only.Somehow I left it over there and as you are awa...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
...et is the most important material as it consist of all my business and credit cards. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...of all my business and credit cards. if I am not bothering you then can you ple...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...ough fedex at 31,Cling Lane, Banglore. please do not hesitate to ask any question if ...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... waiting for your reply. Yours truly, Rati
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23214285714 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24188350872 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0777441991 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 88.875 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447858234406 0.216113520407 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191743257257 0.0766984524023 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819888512041 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271986173307 0.12726935374 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496611071393 0.0580467560999 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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