Dear Amber,
I hope you are all well. The flight home seemed very long but I have landed safely in Canada. I am really enjoyed the holiday, thank you so much for having me, I enjoy my time with you guys very much.
I have a favour to ask. When I got home, I realised that I had left my wallet in your home. As I remembered clearly that you eager to take care of the bills on your own, so that you do not allow me to carry my wallet with me yesterday. I guess that my wallet is still hiding in one of the drawers inside your living room.
Still, there were some important items in my wallet I need in these few days, could you please go through the trouble of sending me the wallet through a courier. Kindly use the FedEx service as they are quick and reliable in my country. I would like to bear the cost of the courier. Please provide me with your bank detail.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to hearing from you. Warm wishes, Chris Wong
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, still, well, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15760869565 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99573475959 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8028622219 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8461538462 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362612715619 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110885279071 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944507983164 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206770454593 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952283245255 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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