You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday When you got home you realised you had left your wallet there thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Hi Smith,
How's going today? I'm writing the letter to ask you to find my wallet in your house and send it back to me.
It was a fantastic Sunday night in your home yesterday. Wendy and I had a great time with you and Sara. Thank you for youre service,especially your IPA beer,I will try that again someday. While when I got home drunk, Wendy just carried me to the bed and I fell asleep fast. This morning I found my walllet lost in your home. Since we were dancing in your living room, and I jumped and played your guitar on the sofa, I'm sure that my wallet was still there. I was just so happy with your beer, the wallet just fell out of my pocket when we danced together. I would be happy if you find it now.
After you get it, you can send it to me by Fedex to my company and surely I will pay for the delivery when I got it.
Thank you in advance and hope we can party at my home two weeks later!

Yours sincerely,
Tony

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.99465240642 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06808805169 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1514000042 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.25 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42389260406 0.216113520407 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156928226549 0.0766984524023 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764868694578 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249595047062 0.12726935374 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671315094492 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.57 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.