Dear manager,
I am wirting this letter to express my concern about the SONY 83' LED TV I purchased on our website. When the TV set was arrived to my house, I opened the package and I could not find the TV stand.
Last week, I made the TV order, because I moved to the new house where there is a large living room. I planned to buy a big TV with stand put on my TV table, since that if hanged on the wall, large TV set is recognized small in this spaceful room.The significance of the TV stand shows up. I checked my order again before my payment to make sure the TV was with the stand. However, there was still an unfishished delivery.
As I mentionde above, I want to ask you to send me the stand, it would be pleased if you can make this delivery as soon as possible, because I am a faithful consumer of you website and for the last 7 years you did not faill my expectations.
Your faithfully,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... recognized small in this spaceful room.The significance of the TV stand shows up. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12921348315 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39935000456 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6557152463 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160948030365 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719131974799 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474180321954 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107536011189 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533691014324 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.97 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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