Dear Paul,
I hope you and your family are well. I want to thank you for inviting me at your home for holiday as it was one of the best holidays that I had. Indeed, I will always cherish the great time I spent with your family.
However, on my return to home, I found out that I have forgotten my wallet at your place. I am able to recall that I kept it in the drawer of study table in your room and while leaving I could not remember to collect it from there. As, you are aware of the fact that it is inestimable for me because it has my Id proofs and most importantly the ATM card which is a must to sustain.
I apologize for the inconvenience caused but could you please send it to me through express courier on my address 224# South Avenue New York. I will take care of all the expenses so send me your bank account details as well.
Thank you for your help and I look forward to see you soon.
Best wishes,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Paul, I hope you and your family are well. I w...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lace. I am able to recall that I kept it in the drawer of study table in your roo...
^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...is inestimable for me because it has my Id proofs and most importantly the ATM ca...
^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... inestimable for me because it has my Id proofs and most importantly the ATM card...
^^
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ost importantly the ATM card which is a must to sustain. I apologize for the inconv...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...nk you for your help and I look forward to see you soon. Best wishes, John ...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to see you soon. Best wishes, John
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09782608696 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13619452114 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6135795144 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387945070655 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147116013727 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109819971543 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261313854859 0.12726935374 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111656023925 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.