You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank your friend for the holiday
Explain that you left your wallet in their house
Give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Hey Neha,
How are you doing? It was a great pleasure being in London with you and your lovely family last week. I am still in the holiday mood and don’t want to come out of the British zone. However, it’s our job which always reminds us about the reality. Had not been an emergency, I wouldn’t have bothered you at all. Actually, I have forgotten my wallet at your home. You might think, how one can be so stupid?
Anyways, thanks a lot for the unforgettable moments of my life. It was a wonderful and cherishing journey and experience all together. I hadn’t seen the internal beauty of London in this way.
On returning, I checked my schedule and got to know about my upcoming seminar where I will be giving a speech on neural networks. It’s a kind of crucial for my career and the invitation card required for this is left at your home in my wallet.
I am fortunate that my one of the friends travelling to London this weekend. Could you please have a conversation with him and handover the wallet? It would be really great if you could manage this. I don’t want to be in more trouble by courier facilities or something else.
I’m extremely sorry if you will have to cancel your weekend plans for me.
Lots of love,
Aparna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, however, if, really, so, still, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62280701754 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62827277696 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6298437157 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.5555555556 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306455332603 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922357407678 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876317710744 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166181026455 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093179332167 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.