You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Thank you friend for the holiday
2. Explain that you left your wallet in their house
3. give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Oliver,
I am your friend Percy. I have reached home safely. Thank you, for making this holiday trip memorable for me. I wish to spend more time with you and your family. I thoroughly enjoyed my vacation in your company.Hope you also equally enjoyed trip with me. Plan another holiday trip to sea side location and this time I book a private vehicle for road journey so that we can take as many leisure breaks as we wish.
However, I left my wallet in your home while I was in hurry to catch my plane. As plane tickets were already booked I managed other expenses by using online payment apps in my Mobile. I remember that I placed my wallet near by your dressing table while I was packing my baggage. As I was almost late for arriving to airport I might have misplaced the purse. it's not difficult to recognise my wallet as it is red in colour with black inner coat. Though my wallet does n't have much money, it contains my ATM card and Identification card. Please do me a favour by sending that wallet to my address which is written on a card and placed in the socket of the wallet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Oliver, I am your friend Percy. I have reached h...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hope
...hly enjoyed my vacation in your company.Hope you also equally enjoyed trip with me. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...take as many leisure breaks as we wish. However, I left my wallet in your home w...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...while I was in hurry to catch my plane. As plane tickets were already booked I man...
^^
Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ile. I remember that I placed my wallet near by your dressing table while I was packing...
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Line 9, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...rport I might have misplaced the purse. its not difficult to recognise my wallet as...
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Line 9, column 409, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...fficult to recognise my wallet as it is red in colour with black inner coat. Though my wallet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35436893204 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30835323864 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.406231924 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267647665025 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101668745776 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796448131269 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208716926394 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967717903952 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.