You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you have left your wallet there.Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:Thank your friend for the holidayExplain that you left your wallet in there houseGive them in

Hello Carrie,

Hope you are doing well, just want to let you know that I have enjoyed alot my vacations at your place, thank you so much and your family for the awesome hospitality. In one week I have visited so many places jus because of you and even I tried variety of new dishes which I never tasted earlier. It was an amazing holiday which I have spent with you .

Furthermore, when I reached home I noticed that I have forget my wallet at your place. I can remember last night when we both went outside for having ice cream I do have my wallet with me, however oncentre we returned back to home I placed in on the freez near to kitchen.

Request you to please have a look and once you got it, could you please courier me the same on my home address. Do remember to take out all the cash as you know if anyone found it heavy in weight while delivering, it may be a chance to lost it .

Waiting to hear from your side.

Thank you
Isha

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
...ity. In one week I have visited so many places jus because of you and even I tried var...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...zing holiday which I have spent with you . Furthermore, when I reached home I ...
^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I have spent with you . Furthermore, when I reached home I noticed that I hav...
^^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...en I reached home I noticed that I have forget my wallet at your place. I can remember...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
... my wallet with me, however oncentre we returned back to home I placed in on the freez near t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: heavy
...the cash as you know if anyone found it heavy in weight while delivering, it may be a chance to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...elivering, it may be a chance to lost it . Waiting to hear from your side. T...
^^
Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing to hear from your side. Thank you Isha
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17934782609 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12379201959 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8081116953 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436737340271 0.216113520407 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188526653257 0.0766984524023 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875644712426 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228115298303 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930860319259 0.0580467560999 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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