You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday When you got home you realize you had left you wallet there Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank your friend for holiday Explain that you left your wallet in his house Give them instru

Dear X,

I hope you are doing well with your family and friends. Though it's a short period of time to spend a quality holiday with you, since we last saw each other.

You deserve big thanks for sending the lovely photographs. I must say it was really outstanding. After coming back to my home I was involved with my cousin's wedding ceremony which took up my time with stress. Thus I was not able to write to you earlier. Sorry for the inconvenience.

By the way, my family enjoyed a huge, vivid holiday. Specially my five years old kid found a new friend who is your little fairy.. He said howdy to you angel. Thanking you is not enough for a delighted holiday from you.

You know my brother who is staying abroad is coming to pay a visit to celebrate his birthday with us. This year we have a public holiday that will make the fun doubled. We are going to arrange a great party. I will be honored if you would join the party with your family. I wish to introduce my family with you in this golden chance.

Big hug!

"Z"

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ll with your family and friends. Though its a short period of time to spend a quali...
^^^
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... family and friends. Though its a short period of time to spend a quality holiday with you, si...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... I must say it was really outstanding. After coming back to my home I was involved w...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 210, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...mony which took up my time with stress. Thus I was not able to write to you earlier....
^^^^
Line 8, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...holiday. Specially my five years old kid found a new friend who is your little fa...
^^
Line 8, column 130, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nd a new friend who is your little fairy.. He said howdy to you angel. Thanking yo...
^^
Line 8, column 174, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...e said howdy to you angel. Thanking you is not enough for a delighted holiday from...
^^
Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...den chance. Big hug! 'Z'
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, thus, well, you know, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41025641026 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33499518166 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661538461538 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3928306368 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.5882352941 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4705882353 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377749277968 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11953301268 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988776238184 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245395139356 0.12726935374 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649185738667 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.11 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.