Dear Alex,
It was a phenomenal weekend at your home and kept multiple unforgettable memories. Those 2 days simply flew away. Thanks for all those fruitful and lovely memories. I am writing this letter to inform you that when I reached home I realized that by mistakenly I forgot my white coat at your house.
The coat looks like a professional one and has a few black shades on the left side of it. In best of my knowledge, when we're playing Pictionary on Sunday's evening, your sister has kept that in the almirah in the dining room. The coat contains some critical documents. For instance, my bank account details and passport.
Tomorrow, when I leave the home for the office I will certainly pass the Brook Street which is not very far from your home as well. If it's plausible and viable for you to be there at 9 am would be really appreciated as I need to hand these document today itself for the verification purposes in my office. If in case, I fail to submit the documents today then I need to go over the destination place and submit it by myself.
Hope you can understand the criticalities and urgency of these documents.
Thanks in advance
Regards
Alexy
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Folks,
Folks,
Could you please help me in commenting on my Writing Section 1 letter that I have written above.
It a good one. 8.5 out of 9.
It a good one. 8.5 out of 9.
Thanks buddy. ;) I am just
Thanks buddy. ;) I am just trying to be more consistent in writing the tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alex, It was a phenomenal weekend at your home...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., my bank account details and passport. Tomorrow, when I leave the home for the ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61611374408 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61125828696 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1503616958 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235161119859 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721731884375 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844573064065 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136779986317 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512030024481 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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