You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In the letter
Give details about the concert
Describe how you won the tickets
Explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Jack,
Hope you are safe and sound!
How’re uncle and aunt? Actually, I want share my happiness with you that I won the two tickets of concert which is organised by our local Council.
This concert held for 2 days that is 22.10.2019 to 23.10.2019. Moreover, it will take place in our local Cricket Stadium which is not only big in size but also consists numerous facilities such as food corner, resting room and free parking. On the first day, the Punjabi singer Tarsem Jassar will come, and the following day the prominent comedian Binu Dhillon host the show.
You have lot of questions in your mind about how I win the tickets? Hence, I would like to tell you about the competition of swimming. I won the first prize in our school swimming competition. As a result, I won these tickets.
As I know, you are a big fan of Tarseem jassar as well as Binu Dhillon, so I decided to go with you on this concert. Along with this, your birthday is coming so this is your birthday present. I hope we will enjoy together at there.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: big
...local Cricket Stadium which is not only big in size but also consists numerous facilities s...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, look, moreover, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62311557789 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39838038665 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658291457286 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3749669176 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7142857143 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352300211885 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110209853478 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104815575878 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189892429134 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953958118597 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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