Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, Regrettably I had lost one of my precious item in Howrah Express Train which arrives every night by 11:00 pm from Howrah station. I travelled from Kolkata to Delhi in the coach number A6 and my seat number was 11. In the morning, I started packing all the open stuffs of mine when Delhi station was close. However , I could not find my laptop bag.
Although! I have put all my best efforts to find my mislaid bag. I searched my bag in the entire compartment and asked my co-passenger at that time . However, failed to collect a single information from anyone. I was travelling to Delhi for a Ted Talk and all the secure data related to my company is available in that laptop. I am imagining that if my laptop goes to someone’s bad hands. Then I may lose my job in the basis of Risk and Compliance ground, which makes me more frightened.
Therefore, a humble and a kind request from end is , would you mind sending a Research team to have quick search for my missing bag. I would really appreciate the generous action taken by the department.
Please contact me at 1234567890 once your team will succeed to find the item.
Many Thanks,
Candidate Name
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ne when Delhi station was close. However , I could not find my laptop bag. Alth...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er , I could not find my laptop bag. Although! I have put all my best efforts to find...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t and asked my co-passenger at that time . However, failed to collect a single inf...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... company is available in that laptop. I am imagining that if my laptop goes to someone'...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a humble and a kind request from end is , would you mind sending a Research team ...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucceed to find the item. Many Thanks, Candidate Name
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54708520179 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57604220105 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8074446939 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4285714286 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123344169184 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355715728218 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514388930646 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855662843232 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449041407599 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.