You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item.
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Ahmed and I am a frequent traveler on your train. I would like to inform you about the loss of my bag on one of your trains. Which is a valuable gift from my father.
On Thursday 15th January on train number 55 route B heading from Cairo to Alexandria. When I was going to my office on your train, I had a phone call which distracted me; I left the bag on my seat. It was a black leather bag with a silver belt which contains an important personal items plus my work laptop.
I would be grateful if you could help me find my bag by taking the required action in such cases. I also request to contact the railway staff who were on duty during that time; moreover, hanging a notice with the bag’s descriptions would be useful.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Should you require any further information, you will contact me on 95782521.
Faithfully yours,
Ahmed karem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e loss of my bag on one of your trains. Which is a valuable gift from my father. On...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...apos;s descriptions would be useful. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41520467836 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42233771019 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7543920763 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189349700895 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710295397921 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546396716324 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120069128106 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029325278083 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.