Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my office laptop while travelling on the train yesterday. It is a black acer laptop and was in a brown leather bag. The bag has some stickers of my name and the same is on the laptop, thus making it easier to identify. Additionally, since I use it for work it has a lot of important and confidential information and if fallen in the wrong hands can be misused.
Let me explain in detail. As I boarded the train I placed my laptop in the carrier above my seat and took a short nap. I took that train from Bugis at 5.30 p.m. and it reach Bedok at 6.30 p.m. Thereafter, as soon as my station arrived I got off the train completely forgetting about the bag. On reaching home I realized that my laptop was missing.
Lastly, I would like to request you to take a look at the surveillance cameras installed in all the compartments of the train therefore making the search easier. Moreover, I could not stress enough on the urgency of the situation and help me find my item immediately.
Looking forward to your quick reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Mary Adams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...at train from Bugis at 5.30 p.m. and it reach Bedok at 6.30 p.m. Thereafter, as soon ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46376811594 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62793051853 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4724249793 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143531858178 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464296060127 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055148751658 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812913547638 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496042471967 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.