you have notices that there are some maintenance and hygienic related issues with a public park near the house you have recently moved to. write a letter to your local council complaining about the condition of the park
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the maintenance of a public park which is located on the opposite side of my house.
To begin with, I have moved to this place with my family members a couple of weeks ago. Yesterday, i have visited to a nearest park and i came back to my house within minutes just due to its maintenance problem. People visiting the park throw litter just anywhere in the park besides in a litter. Moreover, there is no watchman and some local individuals throw domestic garbage at the backside of the garden. furthermore, children frequently come into the park to play with some refreshments and they usually throw it anywhere.
I am highly disappointed with the condition of the park. The dirtiness and unhygienic in the park can spread numerous ailments. I expect immediate action to taken from your side to resolve these issues.
Your Faithfully,
Abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing to complain about the maintenance of a public park which is located on the op...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...weeks ago. Yesterday, i have visited to a nearest park and i came back to my hous...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y, i have visited to a nearest park and i came back to my house within minutes ju...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the park besides in a litter. Moreover, there is no watchman and some local indi...
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Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... garbage at the backside of the garden. furthermore, children frequently come into the park...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74039435172 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9649814197 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312522777039 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106303367199 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050947457845 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192871831549 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379055586294 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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