you have ordered a new computer. Unfortunately, when it arrived you have found some of the accessories like printers, speakers and headphone sets were missing which are to be in the package. You would like the company to send them by next week. Write a letter to the company asking them to send the missing things.
Dear Company,
I was excited to purchase your product, but my experience has turned out very poor. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your product in hopes you can help remedy the situation.
I purchased a new computer, model, Dell Inspiron 10 on 31/08/2018, just three days ago. I would like to inform you that there are some items missing from the order placed. Moreover, I was surprised to see that all the other items such as printers, scanners, and headphone sets are not in the box when unpacked.
I have contacted your store immediately in order to inquire about the missing accessories and spoke to the store manager. He informed me his record shows that the package was delivered with all the items which are ordered in the catalog. In addition, he suggested contacting the courier service who delivered the package.
I was disappointed with the way everything was handled. While I contacted the courier service, they have informed me there was no problem from their end. Therefore, I insist your company take necessary action and send me the missing items early by next week because of which my work is hampered.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Bhavana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s you can help remedy the situation. I purchased a new computer, model, Dell I...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., model, Dell Inspiron 10 on 31/08/2018, just three days ago. I would like to inf...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...10 on 31/08/2018, just three days ago. I would like to inform you that there are...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68843779897 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.266273722 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0769230769 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235334351832 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747567504061 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758537573409 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120281303765 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568363296404 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.