Dear Sir,
I celebrated my grandmother's 90th birthday at your hotel on 5th April. It was a great success and it was all because of your wonderful hospitality services served at your hotel.
The event was on 5th April from 11 am to 3 pm. There were about 100 guests which I invited from my family relatives and friends. There were many elderly people at the party. Three of my elderly guests were on wheelchairs which were taken care of by your well-experienced staff members.
All your staff was very cooperative but I must specially thank Mr. Lakshay Sahni for the special care and attention he gave to all my guests. Every guest was looked after in his supervision during the time of the event. There was soft music in the background and a lot of appetizers and various kinds of drinks. All of the food was delicious from the starters to the main course lunch. The snacks reached every table and even the cake cutting was nicely arranged.
Thanking you and your staff members once again for your excellent services due to which my party was a memorable one.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...appetizers and various kinds of drinks. All of the food was delicious from the starters to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75257731959 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53813511769 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5656925763 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9230769231 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322542383938 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106502939357 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710955745357 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201985920397 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669471437828 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.