You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell him how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Monther,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing a letter to let you know that we have to change our holiday plan to visit France next month due to my work commitments.
I was very much excited to visit Paris because I’ve never been to France before. Besides, it was the ideal time for us to visit there because the current temperature in Paris is between 15 to 20 degrees Celsius which is very reasonable for tourists to visit the countryside and historical places easily. As you are aware that I did book hotel and bought the flight tickets for us to travel; however, I have just got a call from the managing director today that my company has recently been awarded a GIGA project in the region, and we have a requirement of 300 personal to mobilized on-site in next one month time. Due to this, I have been given a task to travel to Philippine, India, and Africa to arrange recruitment trips, and fill all available slots before going on annual vacation. That’s why it won’t be possible to continue with the said plan, hence please let me know your available schedule in February 2020 as I would be free from the assigned task by that time, and we will arrange to travel accordingly.
I look forward to hearing from you soon to finalize the date.
Yours truly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...month due to my work commitments. I was very much excited to visit Paris be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, hence, however, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64102564103 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48800541402 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1796287375 44.8134815571 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.75 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194687753068 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939649542917 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777017165005 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128889251173 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361884125273 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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