You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.
Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:
• Greet your friend and say why you are writing.
• Briefly describe a news story in your country
• Explain why people are interested in it.
Dear Shraddha,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in response to your query about the latest news items in my country.At present,there are many things going on.I will describe few of them.You must be aware about the spread of Covid all over the world.Here,it is worst.Also, the news is about tremendous increase in the rate of petrol, diesel and milk as well.
Everywhere and every news channel is giving an information about the latest cases and improvement.Election is nearby so there is a news coming continuously about that also.Today's breaking news is when there will be a stop in the rates of petrol and diesel?Due to the pandemic,trains are not working in Metro cities so people have to use either their own vehicle or they travel by auto.Both ways, there is a load on common people ultimately.
People are interested in the above news because their life is getting affected.
I am looking forward to your reply about this undergoing changes happening in our country.
Regards,
Sneha
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- Weddings are more expensive in many countries nowadays when compared to the past What is the reason behind this Is this a positive or negative development 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Shraddha, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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...out the latest news items in my country.At present,there are many things going on....
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...test news items in my country.At present,there are many things going on.I will describ...
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... present,there are many things going on.I will describe few of them.You must be a...
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...gs going on.I will describe few of them.You must be aware about the spread of Covid...
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... the spread of Covid all over the world.Here,it is worst.Also, the news is about tre...
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... spread of Covid all over the world.Here,it is worst.Also, the news is about tremen...
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...vid all over the world.Here,it is worst.Also, the news is about tremendous increase ...
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Suggestion: Election
... about the latest cases and improvement.Election is nearby so there is a news coming con...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s a news coming continuously about that also.Todays breaking news is when there will...
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...ews coming continuously about that also.Todays breaking news is when there will be a s...
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... stop in the rates of petrol and diesel?Due to the pandemic,trains are not working ...
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...of petrol and diesel?Due to the pandemic,trains are not working in Metro cities so peop...
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Suggestion: Both
...heir own vehicle or they travel by auto.Both ways, there is a load on common people ...
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...because their life is getting affected. I am looking forward to your reply about...
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...ges happening in our country. Regards, Sneha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95643967457 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.606835333 44.8134815571 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.6 76.5299724578 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.2 16.8248392259 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203360676969 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812777473091 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663655173667 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1107061559 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651506069557 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 8.37731958763 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.