Dear Tom,
Long time no see. How have you been? You said that you’re curious about the opening of the new casino in Macau last time in your email. It is such a great news recently in Macau. And the opening date is determined to be October 1, I bet you must be excited about it.
The new Kingston Casino will be opened just at the Chinese National Day, I guess it just want to attract the huge sum of tourists from the mainland China. It will be the second largest casino in Macau, and it has many new facilities such as 6-D cinema, opera theatre, spa and so on.
People are excited about it. Some of my friends already prepare to visit there on that day. There will be so many fascinating performances, one of which is the singing concert of renowned Hong Kong popstar Andy Lau. In addition, there is a new shopping mall which will be the biggest mall in Macau.
I think you must be interested in it. Why don’t you just come over there? We may have a dinner there and I can book a table for us at the YumGone restaurant which is famous for your favourite thai food. Hope to see you.
Yours,
Derek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have dinner'.
Suggestion: have dinner
...apos;t you just come over there? We may have a dinner there and I can book a table for us at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, second, so, i guess, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.336492891 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23557069454 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611374407583 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4242157335 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151659206698 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528537888924 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537461091457 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924818748576 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754076563551 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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