You have a penfriend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country .Briefly describe ONE news story that has been on TV,on the radio, or in the newspapers in your country , and explain why people are in

Dear Niyati,

Today I am writing this letter to share with you about a news story which are more viral in print media & local new channel. Two day back, one surprised rad conducted by cops at Anand Nagar women guest home, at Ahmedabad.

In that rad, it was found that, women trafficking were going on. Secondly police officer also found that on the back side, girls were force to be a sex worker. And after two days of investigation, gang leader name as Sumit Yadav is a gang leader and he use to kidnap the teenager from school college and force them for this dirty work. After take up the girls details, it was found that many girls are from Kerala, U.P, and some are from Nepal. For me, it is hard to believe that in our nearest part people are doing this type of dirty work. When the news came, I rush to my friends place called as Nittal patel, he is a police officer. I was very happy with this our police officer's so thought to congratulate my friend who was a part of rad team, and he also inform me about feel unwritten fact that many high profile name is with this cases and very soon they are going to arrest them.

Hope you will be enjoying above news. Give my regards to your parents.

Waiting for letter.

Yours faithfully,
Nitin

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Niyati, Today I am writing this letter to share ...
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Suggestion: used
... as Sumit Yadav is a gang leader and he use to kidnap the teenager from school coll...
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...ound that many girls are from Kerala, U.P, and some are from Nepal. For me, it is...
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Suggestion: informs
...who was a part of rad team, and he also inform me about feel unwritten fact that many ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...act that many high profile name is with this cases and very soon they are going to a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39316239316 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05930189862 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3274574249 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103973371441 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424116874898 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384652645402 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864046725805 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342564520405 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.